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Submitted: August 30, 2007
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Whew, quick submission before work!

This is what I've been asked for, so here is a CG'ed version of the Valkyrie Soul lineart! I have made some improvements over the original, most noticeably I changed the spear to *Eriance's original design (when I was drawing this in pchat, he couldn't remember his own drawing ;p).

CRITIQUE please! I need a lot of work in the CG department, so any criticism will help! I experimented with using violet shading in parts, I felt that the piece really 'needed' it. Also, I don't really have the hang of Rockman Zero styled coloring, so this is some sort of pseudo-RMZ/Forti something something, lol.
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You've definitely got solid cel shading down, great solid linework and cool shading too!

So! Have you thought about reflected light? It's subtle, but really pops color and form!
excelent color selection ^_^
*drools*

You're better than me at CG too ;_; This looks sooo nice O_O

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I didn't vote for you!
Looks freat, critique wise, you could maybe do something more with the wings maybe. They look kinda plain. More levels of shade perhaps?

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I came... I saw... I +devwatched...
T-T i want enter to paint chat >_>!

well.. let me see.. the purple in yellow parts looks a little weird and in wings too ô.o but in the pink looks great try whit gray in yellow parts ^^! is all hoppe that helps >.> (and as usual sorry for the sucks english >D)

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very good :clap: its cute ^___^

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Thanks. ^^ I need improvement in "imagined" light, and reflective light totally slipped my mind here. I still have the unflattened PSD so maybe I'll go back and try to make some improvements.

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This character is so freaking elaborate. @_@ Shocks me every time I see her.

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MOVED TO LEMDROP
On to my favorits!

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